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Title: hard to take courage
Pairing: Sam/Dean / Sam&Dean
Rating: :gen
Word: 550
Note: I am writing quick, unbeta'ed stuff, mainly to distract myself from the holidays. If you like, come donate a prompt (anon/pm is fine, more than one is fine, though I might not write everything). Details are here

Summary: for [livejournal.com profile] balder12's prompt: Dean plays with the giant rainbow slinky

At first, Dean just - kinda, holds it- shut up! He's wanted it for years!

It rests in Dean's lap as he drives them away, and he feels up the shape of it as he drives, fingers under the top circle, smooths the curve of the column, the ridges inside.

Dean can see Sam hiding a smile, but it's a fond one, like when he can't help but laugh at Dean's jokes. Doesn't say a word. Knows what is good for him, bitch is covered in glitter.


~
Dean steps out to get the gas pump, and when he's back, it's gone.

"Give it back" Dean makes Dad's hand gesture, Dad's tone. This is important hunter business.

"What?" Sam asks, voice casual innocence. Dean glares. Sam raises an eyebrow, shrugs big, fake-smiles. But there is a real smile there too, the sort Dean hasn't seen in a long while, and Dean knows he is smiling like an idiot too. He dives for under Sam's seat, and of course there it is. Sam pulls it away, but in the car Sam can't use him monster arm reach, and Dean's got him pinned in a second, sitting on him like the bitch he is and grabbing what's his.


Sam gives up easy, smirks, like all he wanted was to prove Dean would fight for it. Dean goes for Sam's hair, something between a ruffle and a noogie, and that is a mistake.

"Sam! The car!" he yells, incredulous. His Baby might never again be free of glitter. Bedazzled hairy sasquatch of a brother. Always said Sam was a pussy.

Gonna vacuum her all better soon as possible.


~
When Sam is asleep that night, Dean slips out. There are five steps leading up to the motel's entrance.

~
The steps are too wide, that's what it is.

~
OK, a slinky as large as this just needs more acceleration power behind it, not like the puny metal things that kids get their fingers stuck in.


~
Dean can just go on a beer run, they'll need beer - at some point . And if he happens to find a good, steep staircase, driving around looking for a place to get beer - well, then, he'll be prepared.

~
It's like parkour, really, who else goes around searching for steep danger-stairs at midnight? It's good for a hunter.

Really, Sam should be practicing this too.

~
It's why Dean wanted the slinky to begin with, after all, playing with Sam.



~
Sam wakes up with Lucifer whispering in his ear. Dean is not there.
Maybe back in hell? Maybe shot by Dick Roman, or eaten by a ghoul?

Sam isn't surprised to find Dean behind the motel, in a dark alley, racing his slinky down some steps.

He isn't surprised, but he can breathe again without feeling like his ribs are cracked.

Dean is smiling, winded in his t-shirt, eyes crinkling like he doesn't remember there is anything else in the world.

He starts a little when he realizes Sam is there, then his smile widens with pleasure. He hands Sam a beer and it looks too grown up for dean's smile at that moment, but Dean opens it with his ring, one smooth move, capable hands. Dean.

~
Sam bumps Dean's shoulder and sits down with him.

Date: 2015-12-25 05:54 pm (UTC)
tabaqui: (s&dhugbybittersweetart)
From: [personal profile] tabaqui
Awwww!
Hell yeah, slinky racing. And bad dreams, and boooooys.
*hugs them*

Lovely stuff.

Date: 2015-12-25 07:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] citrusjava.livejournal.com
Thank you very very much! KKind of you ti say!

Date: 2015-12-26 03:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] balder12.livejournal.com
Aww, I can totally picture Dean wandering around in the middle of the night, looking for the perfect place to race his slinky! And his little boy smile when Sam finds him--so, so Dean, and so adorable. It makes me happy to imagine the two of them getting a moment to do something so innocent, even in the middle of all the darkness in their lives. This was just what I wanted, and so adorable <3. Thank you, sweetie!

Date: 2015-12-26 09:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] citrusjava.livejournal.com

Aw, so glad you liked it!

Date: 2015-12-27 03:56 pm (UTC)
kalliel: (free fall)
From: [personal profile] kalliel
This is so extremely wonderful. <3 It's everything I love about the way you write, and the sharp, vivid way you have of capturing small details with huge emotional, character resonances. This manages to be cute but also devastating, riddled with the pain and tension of S7 even as the lightness of it remains so very real--and not a veneer, or some sort of straw man. Each small scene in this just sears itself into your memory, and makes you fall in love with Sam and Dean and that giant slinky all over again. Perfect!

Date: 2015-12-27 06:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] citrusjava.livejournal.com
YOU JUST MIGHT BE THE KINDEST PERSON EVER.
Thank you, bb <3

Date: 2015-12-28 04:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lyryk.livejournal.com
This is just lovely! Thanks for sharing. :-)

Date: 2015-12-28 05:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] citrusjava.livejournal.com
Aw, thank you so so much!

Date: 2016-01-03 03:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] borgmama1of5.livejournal.com
Awww...Dean looking for a place to try out his slinky!

Date: 2016-01-03 10:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] citrusjava.livejournal.com
Aww, thank you so mcuh for reading and for commenting, bb!

Date: 2016-01-03 04:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] runedgirl.livejournal.com
I can just picture Dean's little boy smile :)

Date: 2016-01-03 10:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] citrusjava.livejournal.com
Aww, thank you, BB <3 <3
I'm so pleased - when I wrote it I was pretty sure it was going to be one of those things I write and no one knows what I am talking about!:)

Date: 2016-01-03 03:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] madebyme-x.livejournal.com
Wonderful! I loved how you explored this further, seeing Dean child-like happy over a toy, and the way this then relaxes both of them. Perfect!

Thank you for sharing :)

Date: 2016-01-03 10:25 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Oh, wow! Thank you so so much!

Date: 2016-01-04 06:45 pm (UTC)
ext_109434: (Default)
From: [identity profile] hunenka.livejournal.com
Everything about this fic is perfect. I could see it all happening, all of it.

But for some reason (don't ask me why), this was my favorite part: "Give it back" Dean makes Dad's hand gesture, Dad's tone. This is important hunter business. I guess I just love it when Dean is so serious about something that others would deem... well, not that serious.

Date: 2016-01-04 07:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] citrusjava.livejournal.com




Aw, wow, thank you so so much!
I am honored and super flattered - thank you!!!!!!!

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