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citrus_java ([personal profile] citrus_java) wrote2014-02-07 08:37 pm
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Writing meme

Snagged from [livejournal.com profile] balder12

I haven't finished and posted that much fic, so perhaps I'll answer about writing in general, if I don't have a good enough fic answer.

Put a number in the comments and I’ll answer accordingly. The mission for those of us who answer the questions, should we accept it, is to stay positive about our writing and ourselves, but to also be fair about our shortcomings.

1. Of the fic you’ve written, of which are you most proud?
2. Favorite tense
3. Favorite POV
4. What are some themes you love writing about?
5. What inspires you to write?
6. Thoughts on critique
7. Create a character on the spot... NOW!
8. Is there a character you love writing for the most? The least? Why?
9. A passage from a WIP
10. What are your strengths in writing?
11. What are your weaknesses in writing?
12. Anything else that you want to know... (otherwise known as Fill in the Blank)

[identity profile] citrusjava.livejournal.com 2014-02-07 11:35 pm (UTC)(link)
You know, for some reason I very often write in present tense. Maybe it's because I feel like I'm observing it and letting the readers know what's going on. Perhaps cause in past tense there is a certain security -it's already happened, nothing to be done about it. Nothing is urgent anymore, there is time to tell the tale. You're not part of it, not in it. It happened to someone else, a long time ago. But if I write write "Sam's about to buckle in, when Dean grabs fistfuls of his shirt and tucks his face in them, inhaling deeply", I feel a bit of the urgency, confusion, uncertainty how to react, that Sam might feel, more than I would had it been a story about something that already happened. As a writer, an interested shipper, and an observer of the scene, I hope to discover what will happen next. But then, "Dean is pulling Sam closer towards him, so hard the material is beginning to rip" is a bit much for me, cause it really yells "nownownow!".


At that point Sam stares at Dean all sort of breathless and round-eyed, and Dean says "Sammy" in a soft voice that's about to crack, and Sam looks like he is going to cry he's so raw, and he takes himself and walks away from the Impala. Because angst milkshake. But it's OK. They'll be so happy in the end.

[identity profile] applegeuse.livejournal.com 2014-02-08 02:19 am (UTC)(link)
UGH YES! You have captured so much about what I love about present tense! When it's really well done, present tense is my favorite of the tenses. There's such a delicious urgency. <3 In non-fic writing, I utterly adore really well-done first person POV in the present tense--when it works, it really, really works...but when it's bad, it's horrid. /o/

Because angst milkshake.

BEST XD

[identity profile] citrusjava.livejournal.com 2014-02-09 01:03 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much!

but when it's bad, it's horrid.

You know, I've heard that a lot, and I don't really get what people are talking about, seems like (and I'm wondering whether that means I'm doing that, so I should get it...!).

I guess if people rely on the format to make the piece work, it's probably gonna be very bad. Like with 3D movies - we get it, it's 3D. Now stop waving that around as if it's enough to make your film good.


BEST XD


All for you, BB *wriggles eyebrows*
I liked what you wrote about angst and that last scene.